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Post by racechick on May 2, 2015 8:53:05 GMT
Thanks Ang. That poem started by me just thinking how even his name sounds magic, special, and it went from there. Like you say, the emotions he aroused, the injustices he suffered. I still feel it all when I think about him. So sad.
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Post by Hammer on May 2, 2015 10:07:41 GMT
Wow RC the best one by far. You might make me start getting into poetry after that one.
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Post by Wß on May 4, 2015 13:04:57 GMT
RC, that's pretty spectacular, I love the passion that comes from the writing only a fan could put pen to paper on.
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Post by RyRy on May 4, 2015 17:45:54 GMT
Damnnn
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Post by CookinFlat6 on May 16, 2015 22:20:40 GMT
I must say, I have found it easier to avoid all opinions and thoughts about Ayrton by others as a way of almost 'preserving' those motions and feelings from that bewildering and unbelievable weekend - that after 20 years still ranks as the biggest introduction to the sheer randomness and seriousness of life.
I finally read your poem Rc and that is incredibly emotive and just so spot on, like the Senna film its great to know their are others who can express the magnitude of that loss.
This part almost got me crying like a Jenson
This is incredible and exactly what so many could feel
So pure and honest, and misunderstood by the same boycotters who salivate over putting Lewis down, different arseholes, same shit
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Post by natny on Jun 22, 2015 16:03:01 GMT
planes, chains, and automobiles
Private plane but what a pain, which hat to wear? which golden chain? twitter twitter oh so bitter, which gap kids shirt will make me fitter?
Gets about a squillion pounds, and barely gets the car around, harsh on tyres and heavy on breaks, chill out dude for goodness sake.
I guess it's time for me to park her, Take that mr third place marker! They say that luck does come in 3, Good god how lucky would that be.
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Post by Wß on Jun 22, 2015 19:38:07 GMT
You call that poetry? Have you seen some of the masterful work in this thread Sir???
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Post by CookinFlat6 on Jun 22, 2015 21:18:10 GMT
Its the spanking new rage in poetry, the 'boycott rationality rap' - BRR, sometimes mistakened for the somewhat more bourgeois 'boycott nationalities crap' BNC sometimes confused for the 'by default challenged' boycott nationality persons
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Post by natny on Jun 23, 2015 1:37:26 GMT
Yes I have to admit, the quality of my poetry is pretty crap compared to some of the others. However, the content and message it sends is right on point.
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Post by racechick on Jun 23, 2015 13:01:07 GMT
A slightly different sort of poem this time. Not sure if it needs tweeking or best not to meddle.
Do Not Put Me In a Box
Do not put me in a box, Held tight with locks, And labelled, ‘He is this’, Or, ‘He is that’. Do not judge me by your standards; You haven’t walked my walk, You don’t listen when I talk. So I will not answer in your tongue When you do me wrong; You’re insults feed me, And I grow strong. Do not measure me, or compare me, I am incomparable, I am unique. And when I weep, Don’t think me weak; You do not cause my tears, I have much darker fears Than the trifling irritations you provide. When I am less the man I could be, Less the man I should be; When I have faced my destiny And come up wanting; When I have looked into my soul And failed myself, Then I will weep. And you will see my pain And misinterpret once again. Do not be so arrogant To think you hurt me, I am no longer a boy! Not your plaything, Not your toy. Do not tolerate me because I can, Rather, accept me for who I am. Do not expect me to come to you with downcast eyes, Or bow my head to your lies. I will not be bowed, I am proud. Instead cast your eyes to the skies Because ‘Still I Rise!’
by racechick
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Post by Wß on Jun 23, 2015 13:19:22 GMT
RC you're so sexy when you write poetry. Mmmm...
This right here is pretty damned brilliant.
And when I weep, Don’t think me weak; You do not cause my tears, I have much darker fears
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Post by racechick on Jun 23, 2015 13:26:49 GMT
Really? I hadn't considered that offshoot!
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Post by CookinFlat6 on Jun 23, 2015 13:52:01 GMT
great stuff RC
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Post by LRW on Jun 23, 2015 14:19:23 GMT
Natny is my new favourite forum member.
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Post by natny on Jun 23, 2015 14:48:00 GMT
honoured! here's a poem to show my gratitude...
Some of those commentators, they are dumb,
brundle loves Button cus he'll take it up the....
bump goes the race car, out comes the red,
brundle loves button cus he loves giving....
head for the finish line, do nothing silly,
brundle loves button cus he lets him touch his...
will he won't he get a drive booked,
brundle doesn't care because he'll still get...
to commentate.
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Post by natny on Jul 1, 2015 15:01:50 GMT
Hamilton at Silverstone
Off the start now here they go, Hamilton crashes out.
Thanks a lot Hamilton. Not only did you let down England (again) but also you ruined my poem. What a dick!
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Post by racechick on Jul 1, 2015 15:06:27 GMT
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Post by LRW on Jul 1, 2015 15:07:48 GMT
Come on RC - youve got to admit - they were both very funny.
You've a challenger to the throne.
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Post by natny on Jul 1, 2015 15:19:56 GMT
thanks for the avatar. me and my chins super appreciate it.
how do I edit that? haha. if not the f*** it ill take it.
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Post by LRW on Jul 1, 2015 16:44:22 GMT
thanks for the avatar. me and my chins super appreciate it. how do I edit that? haha. if not the f*** it ill take it. I'm on my phone. So from memory. Click on your user name. This goes to profile. Then to the right it says "edit profile". Then from there you can upload a new pic in place of the one of you and your ball. Seems the computer illiteracy thing is a genetic thing.
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